So today has been a sad day , me and the love of my life Maria Beadnell has broken up. She was my backbone and everything. We broke up because her god-awful parents thought that we weren't a good match for each other. That is a dumb reason , but its whatever , i'll continue to write release my pain.
Very authentic tone for a tragic romance, but you might probably want to make the language more formal, to better suit an educated Victorian gentleman. Google Victorian terms and slangs.
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